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Array ( [sid] => 129965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out Of Luck...? [time] => 2006-12-30 18:11:03 [hometext] => comments are loved [bodytext] => well here we are
we just ran out of luck
and now your telling me
how you dont give a *****

so now whats gonna happen?
is this really real?
im feeling all the things
you swore id never feel

the feeling of the forgotten
the feeling of lost love
if its lost then come and find me
this isnt the ending ive dreamed of

press rewind and see it all
here comes the rise
there goes the fall

but exactly when
did it all fall apart?
was it before or after
you stole my heart?

im told not to worry
it will all work out fine
lets stop with the replay
im so sick of that line

tell me straight up
dont drag this all out
im sure breaking hearts
is what your all about

too bad you cant break me
so sorry to ruin your fun
im already heavily broken
so go ahead and run

if you want this to work
you should act like you care
or one day youll wake up
and i just wont be there

you werent something i wanted
no. you were a need.
you never understood me
but i was easy to read

i tried to tell you without words
how much you meant to me
but when i looked you in the eyes
you just never seemed to see

so save this love
and youll save me too
lets keep this thing going
and make something new [comments] => 2 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 2 [informant] => broken_not_beautiful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Out Of Luck...?

Contributed by broken_not_beautiful on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



well here we are
we just ran out of luck
and now your telling me
how you dont give a *****

so now whats gonna happen?
is this really real?
im feeling all the things
you swore id never feel

the feeling of the forgotten
the feeling of lost love
if its lost then come and find me
this isnt the ending ive dreamed of

press rewind and see it all
here comes the rise
there goes the fall

but exactly when
did it all fall apart?
was it before or after
you stole my heart?

im told not to worry
it will all work out fine
lets stop with the replay
im so sick of that line

tell me straight up
dont drag this all out
im sure breaking hearts
is what your all about

too bad you cant break me
so sorry to ruin your fun
im already heavily broken
so go ahead and run

if you want this to work
you should act like you care
or one day youll wake up
and i just wont be there

you werent something i wanted
no. you were a need.
you never understood me
but i was easy to read

i tried to tell you without words
how much you meant to me
but when i looked you in the eyes
you just never seemed to see

so save this love
and youll save me too
lets keep this thing going
and make something new




Copyright © broken_not_beautiful ... [ 2006-12-30 18:11:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Out Of Luck...? (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyBabyx3 on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:15:20 PM AEST
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Kailee...

Its sooo good. Whats up with josh? or is this one not about josh? Well whatever it is i hope it works out. Great poem, like usual. I mean you are soo good at this. LOL.

I love youuuuuu ♥
Miranda


Re: Out Of Luck...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:15:01 AM AEST
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Great write. I can relate.

Unknown to myself
Jen




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