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Thunder is heard in the distance
Two brothers face to face
With an army behind them
The clouds gather with a vengeance
As the battle commences

Blood against blood
The rage engulfs them
Brother against brother in a war

They will fight for their bride
They will fight for their bride

She watches from a distance
The men she loves lost in hate
Both have sworn death to the other
Before the end of the day
With their swords drawn to kill
They charge each other in the rain

Their armies gather
In the blood of hate
As she watches
From a distance
As the tears
Run down her face

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
They both fight till death to win

The pain from it hits her heart
The love for both men falls apart
She knows that her love won’t make it
Both died

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
They both fight till death to win

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
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Brother against brother

Contributed by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 04:42:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

The sun rises and covers the land
Thunder is heard in the distance
Two brothers face to face
With an army behind them
The clouds gather with a vengeance
As the battle commences

Blood against blood
The rage engulfs them
Brother against brother in a war

They will fight for their bride
They will fight for their bride

She watches from a distance
The men she loves lost in hate
Both have sworn death to the other
Before the end of the day
With their swords drawn to kill
They charge each other in the rain

Their armies gather
In the blood of hate
As she watches
From a distance
As the tears
Run down her face

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
They both fight till death to win

The pain from it hits her heart
The love for both men falls apart
She knows that her love won’t make it
Both died

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
They both fight till death to win

Brother against brother, lost in their rage
Their men dying all around them
As she watches from a distance
Not sure who is to win
Not sure who is to win
They both fight till death to win

Copyright Â© silver_crested_shadow ... [ 2006-12-30 04:42:34]
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Re: Brother against brother (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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Incredible brought me right to the place with the fight. End sad but emotion is good.

~Michelle~

Re: Brother against brother (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:51:00 AM AEST
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A good and thoughtful write....thank you

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