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Array ( [sid] => 129946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tired [time] => 2006-12-30 00:17:03 [hometext] => Another ranting poem, women man [bodytext] => I’m tired of this
I’m tired of feeling like this
You just think I’m going to wait around forever for you
There’s so much I dig about you
I love how you are always nervously nodding your head
I love the way you keep constantly talking when you are scared
I love that your feet smell
You think you’re ugly
You could give me a whole laundry list about what’s wrong with how you look
But to me you couldn’t be more lovely, and I wouldn’t change a damn thing
You pretend to be so cold sometimes, but I see right through that
You don’t fool me one bit
I see that you care too much and it overwhelms you
So you put on a mask of apathy
Your heart is too fragile for this world and that is the only defense you know
Let me be its shield
Never again will you have to fear of it being hurt, and never again will it be broken
You said to me no one will ever truly love you but someone does
He’s sitting here right now, missing you
But I’ve just about had enough
My heart’s fragile too
I’ve told you I would always be there for you and I meant that
But I need you now and I can’t take much more
And I’m not waiting around forever
One day you’ll look up and I’ll be gone
And I will belong to you no more
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Tired

Contributed by Trauma on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:17:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I’m tired of this
I’m tired of feeling like this
You just think I’m going to wait around forever for you
There’s so much I dig about you
I love how you are always nervously nodding your head
I love the way you keep constantly talking when you are scared
I love that your feet smell
You think you’re ugly
You could give me a whole laundry list about what’s wrong with how you look
But to me you couldn’t be more lovely, and I wouldn’t change a damn thing
You pretend to be so cold sometimes, but I see right through that
You don’t fool me one bit
I see that you care too much and it overwhelms you
So you put on a mask of apathy
Your heart is too fragile for this world and that is the only defense you know
Let me be its shield
Never again will you have to fear of it being hurt, and never again will it be broken
You said to me no one will ever truly love you but someone does
He’s sitting here right now, missing you
But I’ve just about had enough
My heart’s fragile too
I’ve told you I would always be there for you and I meant that
But I need you now and I can’t take much more
And I’m not waiting around forever
One day you’ll look up and I’ll be gone
And I will belong to you no more




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Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:22:26 AM AEST
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I loved this It's great u need to tell that girl how u feel she might feel the same way but its 50/50 chance it could turn out good or it could turn out bad either way if u tell or if u dont once again great poem and keep strong she'll come around

Unknown to myself
Jen


Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:23:28 AM AEST
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I loved this It's great u need to tell that girl how u feel she might feel the same way but its 50/50 chance it could turn out good or it could turn out bad either way if u tell or if u dont once again great poem and keep strong she'll come around

Unknown to myself
Jen


Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverDagger on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:33:58 AM AEST
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Great work! Keep it up!


Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:40:27 AM AEST
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Yes I would show this person this write. You sound to be a true heart defender. What more could one want. Loved the honesty.

~Michelle~


Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 03:39:30 PM AEST
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good write
well done


Re: Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:47:07 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Show her stubborn ass this write. Talk, talk and damn....don't give up. We gals can be a stubborn bunch, especially if we've been burned before. Please be patient. I and most women long for honesty. This is as about as honest as it gets. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Sounds like she shouldn't let you get away.
Peace and hugs,
Laura




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