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Believing doesn’t work anymore
Don’t misconceive me please
But believing doesn’t work anymore…

I want to look at things that are as clear as the mountains after the rain
I want to understand them in such a way
I want an easy life, that’s why im trying so hard
“If theres a room full of treasures, u should be careful to whom u r giving ur keys dear”
You ve always said, I hear you saying
“If theres a room full of treasures, dont waste them in ungratefull fortune hunters”

But I don’t feel like a room full of treasures

I hear you say

That’s all I get

And believing doesn’t work anymore
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The outcome

Contributed by an3n on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Im tired
Believing doesn’t work anymore
Don’t misconceive me please
But believing doesn’t work anymore…

I want to look at things that are as clear as the mountains after the rain
I want to understand them in such a way
I want an easy life, that’s why im trying so hard
“If theres a room full of treasures, u should be careful to whom u r giving ur keys dear”
You ve always said, I hear you saying
“If theres a room full of treasures, dont waste them in ungratefull fortune hunters”

But I don’t feel like a room full of treasures

I hear you say

That’s all I get

And believing doesn’t work anymore

Copyright Â© an3n ... [ 2006-12-29 14:08:43]
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Re: The outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by Metikulus on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:31:33 PM AEST
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says a lot in little words...i like

Re: The outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by an3n on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:54:31 PM AEST
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thank u!

Re: The outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:22:50 AM AEST
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I relate to this alot. We all seem to have moments when we waver. Then we must look around and see the world with a child like wonder and it all comes back again. There is always something to believe in even when the darkest of clouds hit. Keep your chin up. You are talented. Move forward and bend with the winds.

~Michelle~

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