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Array ( [sid] => 129895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trust Destroyed [time] => 2006-12-28 19:11:53 [hometext] => Can refer to love or to ideas about life. Been working this one out for awhile, finding out my aunt has cancer again helped me finish. [bodytext] =>
Weeping, sobbing in the night,

Heart is crushed and broken,

Stepped upon for another’s delight,

Words of sorrow are merely tokens.

Shaken and weary to the core,

Seeking the strength to go on,

Seeming calmness shall be worn,

Taking comfort as on loan.

The hurt and pain is not so hard,

T’is the lie that pierced the heart,

Words spoken in trust are now marred,

None were true, not even at the start.

How can one be so bold?

To purposefully render harm,

To seek the pain of another’s hold,

Betray another with one’s charm.

Crying, raging against the lies,

Questioning the wisdom to be gained,

Tears streaming from the eyes,

Was it worth the pain?

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Trust Destroyed

Contributed by books_4gal on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 07:11:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Weeping, sobbing in the night,

Heart is crushed and broken,

Stepped upon for another’s delight,

Words of sorrow are merely tokens.

Shaken and weary to the core,

Seeking the strength to go on,

Seeming calmness shall be worn,

Taking comfort as on loan.

The hurt and pain is not so hard,

T’is the lie that pierced the heart,

Words spoken in trust are now marred,

None were true, not even at the start.

How can one be so bold?

To purposefully render harm,

To seek the pain of another’s hold,

Betray another with one’s charm.

Crying, raging against the lies,

Questioning the wisdom to be gained,

Tears streaming from the eyes,

Was it worth the pain?

Copyright Â© books_4gal ... [ 2006-12-28 19:11:53]
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Re: Trust Destroyed (User Rating: 1 )
by Millennium on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 07:26:50 PM AEST
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i really love this poem

it almost made me cry though

Re: Trust Destroyed (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:40:16 AM AEST
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To be betrayed by a lie really does hurt our hearts. Sometimes to the point of almost breaking. I do soooo relate to this. Tender write and written well. I am sorry to learn the sad news of your aunt.

Michelle

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