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Array ( [sid] => 129824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NO love [time] => 2006-12-26 22:04:32 [hometext] => its kinda wierd but its not something i would recemend doing [bodytext] => Please tell me

Is it supposed to be like this

Am I supposed to be shot

While you get a miss

I chased you day after day

I cried to myself watching you in the play

I cant believe this is happening to me

Im cutting over a girl that has no love for me

You tell me you love me as a friend but thats not enough

I want it to be more because this life is so rough

Its killing me inside to know youll never love me

I want it to end like in a loving movie

Ill take your hand and carry you away

Ill hold you close and tell you life is ok

Ill kiss you slowly and cherish every chill

I wish this all would happen

But i know it never will [comments] => 6 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 39 [informant] => metalguitarist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
NO love

Contributed by metalguitarist on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Please tell me

Is it supposed to be like this

Am I supposed to be shot

While you get a miss

I chased you day after day

I cried to myself watching you in the play

I cant believe this is happening to me

Im cutting over a girl that has no love for me

You tell me you love me as a friend but thats not enough

I want it to be more because this life is so rough

Its killing me inside to know youll never love me

I want it to end like in a loving movie

Ill take your hand and carry you away

Ill hold you close and tell you life is ok

Ill kiss you slowly and cherish every chill

I wish this all would happen

But i know it never will




Copyright © metalguitarist ... [ 2006-12-26 22:04:32]
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Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by books_4gal on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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Having experienced this, one can never forget the inner torment. You captured that element in my opinion.



Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by random_kisses_xoxo on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!

love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol


Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by random_kisses_xoxo on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:45 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!

love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol


Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by random_kisses_xoxo on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:45 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!

love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol


Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by Epic on Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 02:22:29 AM AEST
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i figure people already told you this, but cheer up man i'm sure you'll find another great person.. great write...


Re: NO love (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyBabyx3 on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 12:12:58 PM AEST
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oh my goodness kyle. Im not even gonna ask ohkay. But really i love this poem verryyy good. Glad you have a ypdc nowww. This is really sad ohkay & i know its true. I love you.

♥Miranda




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