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[sid] => 129820
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Steep
[time] => 2006-12-26 20:56:20
[hometext] => a more experimental poem by me.
[bodytext] => creep and steep into this murky liquid. a mess if you let it become uncontrolled. pacify impurities...accept approval from pending enemies. quick caustic translucent liquid eating away at me. toss this mess into the air and gaze as it dissipates. reactions diversify depending on the creature. some may quiver and some may shutter. lay motionless, unresponsive, stay numb. start and repeat in a controlled enviroment. outline your apparition with this gastly liquid. touch your face to reassure yourself. gasp for particles in this cold dark room. desolation has no remorse it has no feeling. stand straight but cant quite think the same. twirl or flick your hair in the departing breeze. protocol that is meant to be broken. others stare and ask what is this mystery? leave it alone just leave it for the saints. soon it will all be over. if the liquid burns it has become a mess. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 325 [topic] => 73 [informant] => frmpoison2static [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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