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a dream or two, i caught a glimps
of heaven and so i called it you.

I watch you flutter here and there
in your celestial flight, my starlight
balerina gracefully dancing in the
night.

All across the universe music could
be heard, as angels watched with
reverance speaking not a single word.

Gleaming like a moonbeam while you
kept a perfect pace, into my dream
you entered with a smile upon your
face.

i loved you as i watched you skim
across the galaxy, flowing in the
moon light ever lovely as can be.

i wonder if i made a wish would my
dream come true, sweet starlight
balerina may i have this dance with
you.

myheartsvoice

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Starlight Balerina

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 05:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Deep within my slumber i dreamt
a dream or two, i caught a glimps
of heaven and so i called it you.

I watch you flutter here and there
in your celestial flight, my starlight
balerina gracefully dancing in the
night.

All across the universe music could
be heard, as angels watched with
reverance speaking not a single word.

Gleaming like a moonbeam while you
kept a perfect pace, into my dream
you entered with a smile upon your
face.

i loved you as i watched you skim
across the galaxy, flowing in the
moon light ever lovely as can be.

i wonder if i made a wish would my
dream come true, sweet starlight
balerina may i have this dance with
you.

myheartsvoice

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Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 05:14:25 PM AEST
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Absolutely Inspired!!!

Creative w/ a great flow...I LOVED IT!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 06:26:04 PM AEST
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This is incredibly lovely. Such a soft and gentle sway
to the whole piece. And the sentiment is abundantly
beautiful. Very pretty.

Dream on poet .. you shall have your dance.

Exceptional piece. Wonderfully written.

~Breezy

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 08:07:47 PM AEST
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Poem reads very well with a great flight of fancy. Keep those poetic juices flowing.

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:12:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful write! I love how gracefully it flows and the lovely picture it paints in my mind. Yet it seems to have just a hit of sadness….awesome write!

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:59:31 PM AEST
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This is simply bautifull and will make any star wonna dance.
huggs,
emy

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by V-I on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 04:26:23 AM AEST
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Perfection.

Amazing rhyme scheme.

the flow was flawless.

All across the universe music could
be heard, as angels watched with
reverance speaking not a single word.

wise choice of words.

bravo!

V-I

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:50:09 PM AEST
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I certainly know where to go when I need a good pick me up. I'm always guarnteed a smile when I visit your pages my friend. A most beautiful and enchanting write. Always a pleasure in stopping by to visit your pages.
hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Starlight Balerina (User Rating: 1 )
by SeXyDrAgOn on Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 01:31:00 PM AEST
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oh you can have a dance with me! this paints such a wonderful vivid picture for me to gaze upon!

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