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Array ( [sid] => 129771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories [time] => 2006-12-25 14:02:58 [hometext] => Not my usual style, but one of the most beautiful poems I've written. [bodytext] =>


As the world around me fades
I am left with nothing
Where did all the time go that I wasted?
Perhaps I should have cared a little more
That way you would not have left me
Broken, shattered on the floor I weep for you
Was it the things I said?
The things I did?
If I could, I would take it all back
So that you would be by my side forever
I used to say that I was not afraid to die
But now I realize that I fear death more than anything in the world
Because you will not be by my side when that last gasp of air escapes my lungs
I know that we will not be together to watch each other grow old
The road that we walked together has faded into the monochrome mist
Yet I still walk the shrouded path alone
When you left me, the last words on your lips were, "We will meet again when the time is right. Always believe that I am still with you."
I am left to ponder if the promises we made to each other were all for naught
But then I remember all the smiles, the laughs, and all the wonderful times we spent together
I still had so much to say to you, to share with you when you were taken away from me
Yet I know that when we are reunited in the heavenly sky
I will make the angels cry
When I say
"I love you" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 22 [informant] => trackiller2006 [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Memories

Contributed by trackiller2006 on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 02:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove






As the world around me fades
I am left with nothing
Where did all the time go that I wasted?
Perhaps I should have cared a little more
That way you would not have left me
Broken, shattered on the floor I weep for you
Was it the things I said?
The things I did?
If I could, I would take it all back
So that you would be by my side forever
I used to say that I was not afraid to die
But now I realize that I fear death more than anything in the world
Because you will not be by my side when that last gasp of air escapes my lungs
I know that we will not be together to watch each other grow old
The road that we walked together has faded into the monochrome mist
Yet I still walk the shrouded path alone
When you left me, the last words on your lips were, "We will meet again when the time is right. Always believe that I am still with you."
I am left to ponder if the promises we made to each other were all for naught
But then I remember all the smiles, the laughs, and all the wonderful times we spent together
I still had so much to say to you, to share with you when you were taken away from me
Yet I know that when we are reunited in the heavenly sky
I will make the angels cry
When I say
"I love you"




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Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 02:42:48 PM AEST
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Just... wow. A very beautiful and touching poem. Real art. I love it. Keep up the good work :)


Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 05:00:09 PM AEST
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wowww!!!

its such a beautiful poem!!! it made me cry!!
i love this poem..

i been exactly through it too.. even he's gone but i stil love him.. he'l always stay in my heart..

i know how you feel.. but thats life hey!

you have expressed alot in this poem really touched my heart..

take care of urself..

lots of hugs n prayers 4 u..

5 *****


Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 07:12:01 PM AEST
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Very good job. A lot of ppl can relate to this poem. love and the loss of it, are so strong and the idea of dying with either makes them even stronger.

Deff a good write.

keep on writing,
-moses




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