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[title] => This is not a simple promise
[time] => 2006-12-25 12:09:59
[hometext] => This is just somthing I wrote. It jumps around a little, but it is how I really feel about this boy that hurt me badly.
[bodytext] => This it not a simple price. This is not a small scrape on my scared life. Im not like anything you have ever endured. Im cutting picturing your face on my arm. Would you do this to me? Would you hate me now that I do it to you? Cary me and all my regrets away with you. What's left of this slew of crazy mixed up words. Alone in your heart torn apart by your love. Just look what you have made me. Just look at me. This is what you are. What you claimed to love. Im the biggest fan you’ll ever have. And I hate you. My stomach cuts out my heart and shoves it down your throat. Spitting up blood leaving stains on my carpet. Forcing me to get on my hands and knees cleaning up the mess you left behind. Pulling the trigger, finally destroying the monster I created and loved. Would you be my heart? Since you tore mine out and threw it away? Once again im your biggest fan and I will always hate you.
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This is not a simple promise
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blindchoice
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Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 12:09:59 PM in AEST
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This it not a simple price. This is not a small scrape on my scared life. Im not like anything you have ever endured. Im cutting picturing your face on my arm. Would you do this to me? Would you hate me now that I do it to you? Cary me and all my regrets away with you. What's left of this slew of crazy mixed up words. Alone in your heart torn apart by your love. Just look what you have made me. Just look at me. This is what you are. What you claimed to love. Im the biggest fan you’ll ever have. And I hate you. My stomach cuts out my heart and shoves it down your throat. Spitting up blood leaving stains on my carpet. Forcing me to get on my hands and knees cleaning up the mess you left behind. Pulling the trigger, finally destroying the monster I created and loved. Would you be my heart? Since you tore mine out and threw it away? Once again im your biggest fan and I will always hate you.
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Re: This is not a simple promise
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by Saloni on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 05:04:46 PM AEST
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| keep strong!! |
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Re: This is not a simple promise
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by VR2776 on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 09:16:48 AM AEST
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| very interesting >>> I like this and yet hope that you know that time heals all wounds .... |
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