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Array ( [sid] => 129713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Parental Hell [time] => 2006-12-23 02:00:04 [hometext] => IT WAS LIFE [bodytext] => Teary eyes swollen with pain
Senseless conflict that had no shame
Family affairs that cried for help
Siblings protected from parental hell

Sleepless nights curled up in bed
Restless morning filled with dread
Mothers addiction to spousal harm
How it seem she never cared

Moving onto a unrealistic world
Was so distant and seemed so spoiled
I wanted freedom from the war I lived
I wanted freedom from the life i lived

I got my freedom
I got my life
I got an outlook
That feels just right

So now I知 free
So now I知 free
So now I知 free
To live a new reality [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 51 [informant] => epic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
Parental Hell

Contributed by epic on Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 02:00:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Event



Teary eyes swollen with pain
Senseless conflict that had no shame
Family affairs that cried for help
Siblings protected from parental hell

Sleepless nights curled up in bed
Restless morning filled with dread
Mothers addiction to spousal harm
How it seem she never cared

Moving onto a unrealistic world
Was so distant and seemed so spoiled
I wanted freedom from the war I lived
I wanted freedom from the life i lived

I got my freedom
I got my life
I got an outlook
That feels just right

So now I知 free
So now I知 free
So now I知 free
To live a new reality




Copyright ツゥ epic ... [ 2006-12-23 02:00:04]
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Re: Parental Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:59:52 PM AEST
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This is good..keep your pen flowing as you have a lyrical and deep write here.

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien


Re: Parental Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Naomi on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:22:09 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, I have felt your pain, now take your shoes off and go run in the rain!

There is so much life has to offer us, take it day by day, and enjoy!

Keep writing,
Naomi




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