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Array ( [sid] => 129703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Notice [time] => 2006-12-22 19:38:50 [hometext] => Wish He Would Freakin Notice Me Dang It..... Comments Are Greatly Apperciated!! [bodytext] => At times I feel as if he doesn’t even notice me.
He could be talking to me and not realize I was the one he was talking to.
But I've got to protect my heart
I can’t let it get to me
I won’t let it get to me
That’s not working to well though
He doesn’t realize how many tears he causes
He doesn’t realize I'm here and always have been
He probably won't even notice when I’m gone
Soon I will know if he does notices me
For I might not be here for much longer.
For to many tears slide down my face to stay with this pain

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Notice

Contributed by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 07:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

At times I feel as if he doesn’t even notice me.
He could be talking to me and not realize I was the one he was talking to.
But I've got to protect my heart
I can’t let it get to me
I won’t let it get to me
That’s not working to well though
He doesn’t realize how many tears he causes
He doesn’t realize I'm here and always have been
He probably won't even notice when I’m gone
Soon I will know if he does notices me
For I might not be here for much longer.
For to many tears slide down my face to stay with this pain

Copyright Â© Jen_unknown_to_myself ... [ 2006-12-22 19:38:50]
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Re: Notice (User Rating: 1 )
by Smartie on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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Wow, thats amazing...I know what it's like to love someone more than anything...and to once even know they loved you as much as you loved them...and no that...everytime you see them, you just have to stop and look at them...and still they don't even notice you...prefect way of putting it into words.

Smartie

Re: Notice (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 09:05:38 PM AEST
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Wow, great work, it must be real hard to be there for someone and to have such deep feelings about them and they don't even notice you. A nice poem indeed, but I've said it many times, suicide is never an option.

Life moves on, and so should you.

May peace find you soon.
Mike

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