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A beautiful day
Contributed by
Nirvana12
on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 06:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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In the morning when I first wake up, it feels like the sun just went down. I watch the children walk towards their education, I watch the adults do the same.
The man-made lake shimmers in the distance, swaying up and down with the wind. The orange sun hides it's face behind the clouds, this picture god painted seems flawless.
There's an airplane that flys up above me, its engines are hollering down. I wonder where they would be going, could it be better than here?
This morning seems to be perfect, I have no worries of the upcoming day. I'll just sit here and watch everybody, while I let my mind go out to play.
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2006-12-21 18:06:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A beautiful day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 06:49:15 PM AEST (User
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It gives off a very feel. It is very descriptive and well thought out.
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