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Array ( [sid] => 129642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dream boy [time] => 2006-12-21 00:08:02 [hometext] => This is dedicated to a boy that i like and he likes me TOO! Please comment it's like a story [bodytext] => I'm sorry is all he said. My eyes filled with tears...Everyone staring at us.I wanted to punch him, But instead the boy i always admired from a afar cradlled me like a baby in his arms. Holding me back from punching my ex and that girl.He whispered sweet things into my ears. slowly calming me down.i thought to myself why did i waste my time. Me finding my self sinking to floor once more over a guy. But never touching the ground. all because the one. The one that had that touch to make me melt like chocolate in his arms. Held me up. but i resisted any asistance. i was crying, Wrapping my hands around him. trying to hold back but failing everytime. he stayed there with me. on the floor trying to comfort me. Hugging me and making me laugh at his jokes. when the bell finally rang. he took me by the hand, kissed it, and said " I will call you. okay. Just wait for me after class". He walked with me hugging me like we dated for ever. Even though we were just friends. We behaved like young lovers. He walked me home. grabbing me, Singing to me, and holding me. when we were off the street we sneeked into the parks forest. He said he wanted to show me something. we walked over to a tree. he sat on the ground asking me to join him. so i did. we layed there just watching the sky. one kiss under the warm sun, a cuddle between the two of us was better than anything we both felt. He called me and we talked. Then at school on my birthday and his birthday too. He asked on one knee if i would be his one true love, and his birthday gift. yes was all we heard. now that boy who i admired from afar is mine! his sweet whispers, and jokes, bear hugz all mine.
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Dream boy

Contributed by Butterfly_Of_Passion on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 12:08:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I'm sorry is all he said. My eyes filled with tears...Everyone staring at us.I wanted to punch him, But instead the boy i always admired from a afar cradlled me like a baby in his arms. Holding me back from punching my ex and that girl.He whispered sweet things into my ears. slowly calming me down.i thought to myself why did i waste my time. Me finding my self sinking to floor once more over a guy. But never touching the ground. all because the one. The one that had that touch to make me melt like chocolate in his arms. Held me up. but i resisted any asistance. i was crying, Wrapping my hands around him. trying to hold back but failing everytime. he stayed there with me. on the floor trying to comfort me. Hugging me and making me laugh at his jokes. when the bell finally rang. he took me by the hand, kissed it, and said " I will call you. okay. Just wait for me after class". He walked with me hugging me like we dated for ever. Even though we were just friends. We behaved like young lovers. He walked me home. grabbing me, Singing to me, and holding me. when we were off the street we sneeked into the parks forest. He said he wanted to show me something. we walked over to a tree. he sat on the ground asking me to join him. so i did. we layed there just watching the sky. one kiss under the warm sun, a cuddle between the two of us was better than anything we both felt. He called me and we talked. Then at school on my birthday and his birthday too. He asked on one knee if i would be his one true love, and his birthday gift. yes was all we heard. now that boy who i admired from afar is mine! his sweet whispers, and jokes, bear hugz all mine.




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Re: Dream boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 02:23:46 PM AEST
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I'm glad you got the happy ending! (Not all of us do :( !) You convey that jumbled up feeling of excitement well, nice wirte,

2sdy xxx




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