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Array ( [sid] => 129636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reflection [time] => 2006-12-20 18:16:28 [hometext] => What I see in my reflection... Comments are very appreciated. Trying to decide whether I should enter this poem or [bodytext] => The clear blue water, shining,
Shows the snake within me.
In the window's polished glass,
The raven soars where I should be.
By the camera's glinting lens,
I glimpse the wolf in wating.
And the mirrors all around,
Catch the desperate fox evading-
Light's dangerous illusion,
My reflection, or delusion? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 73 [informant] => RLSS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Reflection

Contributed by RLSS on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The clear blue water, shining,
Shows the snake within me.
In the window's polished glass,
The raven soars where I should be.
By the camera's glinting lens,
I glimpse the wolf in wating.
And the mirrors all around,
Catch the desperate fox evading-
Light's dangerous illusion,
My reflection, or delusion?

Copyright © RLSS ... [ 2006-12-20 18:16:28]
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Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyBabyx3 on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:08:59 PM AEST
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This is really good. I had to read it twice to completly get it but its really really good. Nice write.

♥Miranda

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:35:53 PM AEST
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A thought provoking write you have here. I'm so glad I stopped by your pages. I find your work really interesting. You are able to say so much with so little use of words.
I can't wait to read more from you~
Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m
PS by the way either clouds or reflection would be great to enter into a school contest. The choice in the end is up to you which one you choose. Goodluck :-)

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by MandiLee on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:49:38 PM AEST
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a quick simple yet beautiful poem!
(and thx for the comment on my poem!)

mandi

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 09:55:50 PM AEST
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I loved the images in this. Nice flow very beautiful.

Michelle

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:34:29 AM AEST
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Very cool poem. Flows excellently. Well done

Nathan

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Nirvana12 on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 08:30:46 PM AEST
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So far these 2 poems that I have read by you have been increadible it would be tough for me to decide so far which one you should enter because they are both so good. I don't like many other peoples poetry but yours blows me away. Keep it up

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:49:14 PM AEST
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i loved the imagery in this poem! this was an awesome write

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