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Array ( [sid] => 129624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life through my brown eyes [time] => 2006-12-20 13:49:52 [hometext] => if this is true, then i am sorry but someone has to set the record straight about life. [bodytext] => How i see life through my eyes you say
well then.....let me tell you
if you see a couple in love
i see the couple in a fight
if you see a person with a smile on their face
and i see a sad person on the inside
if you see a person with good luck all around them
then i see them with a huge amount of bad luck in their future
if you call someone your good luck charm
then in reverse, you are their bad luck charm, and they will leave you soon
you say your life is rough with no good side to it
then i see a brighter day for all who thinks they have rough
i am suprised that you are thinking that
this might all be true to the eye, but to tell you the truth
Most of these stuff is so not everything you see or hear is a lie
only if you belive it is. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 21 [informant] => PreciousKitten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Life through my brown eyes

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 01:49:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

How i see life through my eyes you say
well then.....let me tell you
if you see a couple in love
i see the couple in a fight
if you see a person with a smile on their face
and i see a sad person on the inside
if you see a person with good luck all around them
then i see them with a huge amount of bad luck in their future
if you call someone your good luck charm
then in reverse, you are their bad luck charm, and they will leave you soon
you say your life is rough with no good side to it
then i see a brighter day for all who thinks they have rough
i am suprised that you are thinking that
this might all be true to the eye, but to tell you the truth
Most of these stuff is so not everything you see or hear is a lie
only if you belive it is.

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2006-12-20 13:49:52]
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Re: Life through my brown eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 04:38:32 PM AEST
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interesting write.. its full of powerful emotion and pessimism.. I really hope you dont' feel this way about life and you were just having a bad day.. this is not a good way to look at life.. someone once told me that you have to look at things optimistically and be positive.. no not everyone is happy and some things aren't what you seen but being honest here myself.. alot of those happy couples are happy and alot of people just seem to have charm and good luck about them.. life isn't all sadness and lies.. there is good and bad.. you have to find the good and what is good for you.. very good write though..

Vampyress Jenni

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