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Array ( [sid] => 129622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relief [time] => 2006-12-20 13:31:06 [hometext] => I came on just to check up...and i was melted by all the concerned comments..everyone that cared about me actually made me cry and i just want to thank everyone for taking thier time to left me know im not alone [bodytext] => A girl sat with a gun in her hand
She thought it out and had it planned
But something stopped her on the way
Something that she had everyday
So many people really do care
And they really want her to be there
Feeling guilty but so relieved
They actually listened and believed
She put the gun down on the floor
Feeling stronger then ever before
I wonder if those people knew
Exactly what their words would do
That together they gave some hope
And some words to help her cope
That as a group they helped her decided
Never to think about or choose suicide
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Relief

Contributed by nothingness on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 01:31:06 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

A girl sat with a gun in her hand
She thought it out and had it planned
But something stopped her on the way
Something that she had everyday
So many people really do care
And they really want her to be there
Feeling guilty but so relieved
They actually listened and believed
She put the gun down on the floor
Feeling stronger then ever before
I wonder if those people knew
Exactly what their words would do
That together they gave some hope
And some words to help her cope
That as a group they helped her decided
Never to think about or choose suicide

Copyright © nothingness ... [ 2006-12-20 13:31:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Relief (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 03:02:48 PM AEST
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Its good to know that you have finally gotten through those suicidal thoughts. We are all here for ya hun, sometimes the only people who will help you up are complete strangers. Keep the good work up!

Mike

Re: Relief (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 04:41:38 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. I am glad to see you are feeling better.. you are a cared about person .. don't forget that.. you have a purpose and remember God loves you as do all of us here.. take care of yourself..

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Relief (User Rating: 1 )
by RLSS on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:09:30 PM AEST
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Live life- it's worth it. The expression is worth it, this is worth it. You are strong. Stay strong- your poetry is.

Re: Relief (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:02:22 PM AEST
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There are so many here who would love so much to help you including myself. Feel free whenever you want to pm me. There is a much brighter future out there for you my friend. Never feel alone for we are always here for you~
hugs n prayers,
sue m

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