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Array ( [sid] => 129616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TIME [time] => 2006-12-20 11:14:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You told me that you needed some time

But all I can think of is damn your fine
I thought to my self and told my self , I will try
And I must have been the luckiest guy

I wanted you to be with me and to give me a chance

To show you that it is easy to forget about the past
You said it was too early and to give it some time
But to me , I am running out of time

I dont know what to do , or to say

But to sit here and think , to think

Of what I could have done to be your Hun

Do one thing for me , and forget him

Yea .. its hard cause you two went pretty damn far

But one day I want to be that guy

Who you think of every night

To be there, when your glad , sad , and maybe when your mad

What I am trying to say is , give me a shot , and dont leave me with my head in the ground

And I promise I wont let you down
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ahaynes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

TIME

Contributed by ahaynes on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 11:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You told me that you needed some time

But all I can think of is damn your fine
I thought to my self and told my self , I will try
And I must have been the luckiest guy

I wanted you to be with me and to give me a chance

To show you that it is easy to forget about the past
You said it was too early and to give it some time
But to me , I am running out of time

I dont know what to do , or to say

But to sit here and think , to think

Of what I could have done to be your Hun

Do one thing for me , and forget him

Yea .. its hard cause you two went pretty damn far

But one day I want to be that guy

Who you think of every night

To be there, when your glad , sad , and maybe when your mad

What I am trying to say is , give me a shot , and dont leave me with my head in the ground

And I promise I wont let you down

Copyright © ahaynes ... [ 2006-12-20 11:14:59]
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Re: TIME (User Rating: 1 )
by evangelise on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 12:25:30 PM AEST
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i like this, very heart felt,
and has meaning

Re: TIME (User Rating: 1 )
by evangelise on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 09:17:30 AM AEST
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i like this , love the way you wrote it,
a story of thoughts, from the heart.
well done, enjoyed reading this

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