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Array ( [sid] => 129547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unbreakable [time] => 2006-12-18 14:31:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Iam spinning out of control
**** it, Iam dying I cant take
The hurt much longer, the heartache,
the never ending struggle to be loved,
But if only just one, a love that wont do
me wrong wont hurt me never again,
Like before..and Iam spinning out of control.
Ifeel like Iam dying inside..slowly and Iam
still hurting. Even after all these years and all
the d*** fears Iam still hurting. And I cant
stopcrying inside. But I ont show it
in my features..my eyes you rarely will see
my hurt inside. And yes, Iam strong and
yes Iam brave fo surviving.
But even the unbreakable must break
sometime and you will watch me as I
slowly break apart..inside slowly never ending.
Because you cant stop it and neither can I.
Every flower wilts..watch me closely and you
will see my feathered wings falling.
The heartache is still to much and nobody
can fix that either. And Ive said you cant
break whats already broken, listen closely
you will hear my heart breaking even more..
Very soon I will break and unbreakable
I will be nomore!

by:Lydia Badgwell [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lyddie [notes] => Edited due to the use of a banned word. Please read the site rules. Please star out the whole word and do not try to fool the word filters again. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Unbreakable

Contributed by lyddie on Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 02:31:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Iam spinning out of control
**** it, Iam dying I cant take
The hurt much longer, the heartache,
the never ending struggle to be loved,
But if only just one, a love that wont do
me wrong wont hurt me never again,
Like before..and Iam spinning out of control.
Ifeel like Iam dying inside..slowly and Iam
still hurting. Even after all these years and all
the d*** fears Iam still hurting. And I cant
stopcrying inside. But I ont show it
in my features..my eyes you rarely will see
my hurt inside. And yes, Iam strong and
yes Iam brave fo surviving.
But even the unbreakable must break
sometime and you will watch me as I
slowly break apart..inside slowly never ending.
Because you cant stop it and neither can I.
Every flower wilts..watch me closely and you
will see my feathered wings falling.
The heartache is still to much and nobody
can fix that either. And Ive said you cant
break whats already broken, listen closely
you will hear my heart breaking even more..
Very soon I will break and unbreakable
I will be nomore!

by:Lydia Badgwell




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Re: Unbreakable (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 04:56:18 PM AEST
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I kinda know how you feel. I suck at advice, but the worst thing you can ever do is give up hoping. I felt this one.


Re: Unbreakable (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 09:16:04 PM AEST
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we are but fragile people, and when we falter, it always hurts.
but if we find the ground and pull ourselves back on track, only then can we heal and let ourselves un-break.great poem!

cheers,
-glass




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