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Array ( [sid] => 129539 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => At the club [time] => 2006-12-18 09:18:30 [hometext] => when u think hooking up was easy, gets alittle confusing(havent done comedy for awhile) [bodytext] => at the club checkin out the hotties
girls shakin there booties, making me horny
I see the one " for tonight" eyeing me
a table behind some other guy
as the waiter walks by "stops" says can i help you
smooth player that i am said, yea
send a martini to the blondie, its on me

receives the glass, waves, whispers thanks
i wink, whisper your welcome, got a wink from the other guy
what the... i blink, anyway, i really want to talk to her
hand signaled her to come by to say hi
approaches me, hair back ,feeling lucky
oh my who is that guy? approaching my table, my luck gets worse
when she says, "oh you were calling for that guy, what a bad choice" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 7 [informant] => ek_da_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

At the club

Contributed by ek_da_poet on Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 09:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

at the club checkin out the hotties
girls shakin there booties, making me horny
I see the one " for tonight" eyeing me
a table behind some other guy
as the waiter walks by "stops" says can i help you
smooth player that i am said, yea
send a martini to the blondie, its on me

receives the glass, waves, whispers thanks
i wink, whisper your welcome, got a wink from the other guy
what the... i blink, anyway, i really want to talk to her
hand signaled her to come by to say hi
approaches me, hair back ,feeling lucky
oh my who is that guy? approaching my table, my luck gets worse
when she says, "oh you were calling for that guy, what a bad choice"

Copyright © ek_da_poet ... [ 2006-12-18 09:18:30]
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Re: At the club (User Rating: 1 )
by Ratwick on Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 10:18:13 AM AEST
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Dude, I know exactly what you are talking about, Ive had pretty much the sane thing happen to me! Hilarious! except when its happening and you dont get laid let alone the girls number!
Thanks for posting!
Write On!
Peace

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