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Array ( [sid] => 129494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God Bless My friends [time] => 2006-12-17 02:21:44 [hometext] => You know who you are... Thank You dearly... [bodytext] =>

I wrote the words that I felt in my heart…
I felt that my thoughts were a work of art…

The things that happened in my life…
All the pain and all the strife…

My love and all that happened…
I would grab some paper and quickly pen…

I would put it to print all I felt…
On my emotional knee I knelt…

I spilled it out there for all to see…
It made me feel so completely free…

I gave it to those who would have my soul…
Dangling on a string for them to control…

They took my heart and ripped it out…
And I had nothing in me to write about…

With My wife and friend’s caring concern…
I rose from the depression and did what I yearned…

I grabbed a pen and quickly wrote…
This heart felt work that came in a note…

On a napkin I found in a bar…
These little words would take me far…

I found what they took was never gone…
What they tried to do was very wrong…

They preyed on my weakness and took what was mine…
And what they did showed to me in a sign…

They can’t have it they can go to hell…
Because in evil they always dwell…

As you can see my dear friends…
I am back and will be to my end…

For they cannot take what is not theirs…
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God Bless My friends

Contributed by oneir8dude on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 02:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems





I wrote the words that I felt in my heart…
I felt that my thoughts were a work of art…

The things that happened in my life…
All the pain and all the strife…

My love and all that happened…
I would grab some paper and quickly pen…

I would put it to print all I felt…
On my emotional knee I knelt…

I spilled it out there for all to see…
It made me feel so completely free…

I gave it to those who would have my soul…
Dangling on a string for them to control…

They took my heart and ripped it out…
And I had nothing in me to write about…

With My wife and friend’s caring concern…
I rose from the depression and did what I yearned…

I grabbed a pen and quickly wrote…
This heart felt work that came in a note…

On a napkin I found in a bar…
These little words would take me far…

I found what they took was never gone…
What they tried to do was very wrong…

They preyed on my weakness and took what was mine…
And what they did showed to me in a sign…

They can’t have it they can go to hell…
Because in evil they always dwell…

As you can see my dear friends…
I am back and will be to my end…

For they cannot take what is not theirs…




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Re: God Bless My friends (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 09:33:51 AM AEST
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Right on, Bill. That last line screamed loudly. Ya can't keep a good man down. *wink* I've missed you and so glad you're back. (loves ya bro)
Peace and hugs,
Your sis....Laura


Re: God Bless My friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 11:14:52 AM AEST
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For starters that picture is so cute! and secondly, i agree with Laura completely (does anyone ever disagree with her?) good to see ya back, great write,

2sdy xxx


Re: God Bless My friends (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 01:10:12 PM AEST
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Bill I am so glad to see you are back!
I would still make a complaint against them though. It is your work you are so very right.

Loved the pic fits perfectly. Know your friends are always nearby.

hugs
~Michelle~


Re: God Bless My friends (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 04:25:07 PM AEST
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wow beautifully written bill!! glad to see a talented writer writing again.. very inspriational poem indeed.. don't let anyone stop you from your passion.. Great job

Jenni


Re: God Bless My friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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Dearest Bill you can never keep a great man down, I totally agree with that. I'm so sorry you went through what you did. You are an extraordinary guy who faced a big set back, but fought hard and came back standing on his two feet. God bless you, your beautiful wife, your loving kids and your loyal friends too. It brings my heart joy to see you back & posting again my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m




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