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Array ( [sid] => 129470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (Unfinished song) [time] => 2006-12-16 02:21:12 [hometext] => Unfinished lyrics (for over a year) for a song, decided to post as well, feedback most welcome! [bodytext] => I remember when we used to play
Drinkin gin 'n juice, that was back in tha day
We would drive all night
We would sleep all day
Talk of fighting for right, but never know what to say...hey..
whatever

Now it's over and done, roughly 6 years ago
I hope you've all had your fun
I hope you went where you'd go
Well I'm not done
And I'm not gone
I'm still believing in reasons that I know not much of [comments] => 4 [counter] => 338 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Ratwick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

(Unfinished song)

Contributed by Ratwick on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 02:21:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I remember when we used to play
Drinkin gin 'n juice, that was back in tha day
We would drive all night
We would sleep all day
Talk of fighting for right, but never know what to say...hey..
whatever

Now it's over and done, roughly 6 years ago
I hope you've all had your fun
I hope you went where you'd go
Well I'm not done
And I'm not gone
I'm still believing in reasons that I know not much of

Copyright © Ratwick ... [ 2006-12-16 02:21:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: (Unfinished song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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it's gonna rock when it's done

Re: (Unfinished song) (User Rating: 1 )
by satanssecret1369 on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 05:17:17 AM AEST
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As poetry, this didn't do much for me, but when I re-read it and kind of envisioned (or heard, I suppose) a tune to accompany it, this really got me.
I'm not so sure how you could revise it or anything, because, well, writing is from the heart, and I don't think anyone should ever revise due to what someone else says, but I will say I'm anticipating the rest of this.

--DJ--

Re: (Unfinished song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Teusday-Moon on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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I really like it so far. I think it will be awesome in the end

Re: (Unfinished song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 12:56:35 PM AEST
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It's something that's easy to imagine, and has a very catchy flow. I'm like the rest....I eagerly await the finished work.

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