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Array ( [sid] => 129418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Feeding [time] => 2006-12-15 01:19:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Insecurities are taking over me
Once again
Thots of the past
Pains of the present
And fears of the future.

All eating away at me
Like parasites on a host
And cannibals on a tribe traitor
My mine and heart don’t agree anymore
They are betraying each other

What do I act on?
What do I allow myself to do?
Either to love blindly
Or think honestly
Either way I will continue to hurt.

Is this all really worth it?
Am I loved like it is said?
I hope that all of the past
Will not revive and repeat itself
And bring this to a brutal end.

My eyes see beauty
My heart sees love
And my mind sees pain and deceit
I am allowing myself to die once more
All for love…

I will once again become
An empty shell of nothingness
No hope
No feeling
Nothing

Being fed on by the vultures
The people that say they care
That feed on pain and agony
They will find a feast in me
And I am no one so they’ll feed.

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The Feeding

Contributed by CksBabydoll on Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 01:19:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Insecurities are taking over me
Once again
Thots of the past
Pains of the present
And fears of the future.

All eating away at me
Like parasites on a host
And cannibals on a tribe traitor
My mine and heart don’t agree anymore
They are betraying each other

What do I act on?
What do I allow myself to do?
Either to love blindly
Or think honestly
Either way I will continue to hurt.

Is this all really worth it?
Am I loved like it is said?
I hope that all of the past
Will not revive and repeat itself
And bring this to a brutal end.

My eyes see beauty
My heart sees love
And my mind sees pain and deceit
I am allowing myself to die once more
All for love…

I will once again become
An empty shell of nothingness
No hope
No feeling
Nothing

Being fed on by the vultures
The people that say they care
That feed on pain and agony
They will find a feast in me
And I am no one so they’ll feed.

Copyright Â© CksBabydoll ... [ 2006-12-15 01:19:38]
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Re: The Feeding (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:12:46 AM AEST
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Don't be so hard on yourself, please?
Sad but great writing!
huggs, prayer,
emy

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