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Array ( [sid] => 129408 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Were we just dancing? [time] => 2006-12-14 19:43:35 [hometext] => what the hell was us about? [bodytext] => Oh dear
Wot have u done
I'm startled now
and I want to run
Tell me it's not true
This can't be u
your acting very strangely
Who are you
Everything was perfect
I thought we were sooo happy
now i feel
speechless
and distant.
Why did u have to offend me?
doubt me too
What were you hoping to achieve
Damn u
Damn me
I thought we were ment for keeps
for at least a long time...
How could I have known
our time together was fleeting
We were travelling at a million miles per minute
and now this
The emergency stop
The panic button
This sadness
This pain
This nothingness of uncertainity.
Quiet tears run down my face
My heart is heavy
My soul is lost
My spirit awaits instruction
to pick up the pieces
But I want
to run
to hide
and never feel like this again.
Tormented
disappointed
and
hollow.
but hey
apparenly
I got personality
wot a concellation prize
and funnily enuff
that brings me no comfort
I have seriously miscalculated the depth of your character
This is the result of you having miscalculated mine. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 13 [informant] => maggsie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Were we just dancing?

Contributed by maggsie on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Oh dear
Wot have u done
I'm startled now
and I want to run
Tell me it's not true
This can't be u
your acting very strangely
Who are you
Everything was perfect
I thought we were sooo happy
now i feel
speechless
and distant.
Why did u have to offend me?
doubt me too
What were you hoping to achieve
Damn u
Damn me
I thought we were ment for keeps
for at least a long time...
How could I have known
our time together was fleeting
We were travelling at a million miles per minute
and now this
The emergency stop
The panic button
This sadness
This pain
This nothingness of uncertainity.
Quiet tears run down my face
My heart is heavy
My soul is lost
My spirit awaits instruction
to pick up the pieces
But I want
to run
to hide
and never feel like this again.
Tormented
disappointed
and
hollow.
but hey
apparenly
I got personality
wot a concellation prize
and funnily enuff
that brings me no comfort
I have seriously miscalculated the depth of your character
This is the result of you having miscalculated mine.

Copyright © maggsie ... [ 2006-12-14 19:43:35]
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Re: Were we just dancing? (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 09:31:31 PM AEST
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Oh yes, the break up poem. When the heart is at its lowest, saddest, most despicable point, it cries out and utters brilliant poetry like this. Break ups suck, but I love the poetry it produces. Very nice.

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