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Array ( [sid] => 129383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I long for you [time] => 2006-12-13 21:57:22 [hometext] => I recently had my heart broken by my first love...this is what came out of it [bodytext] => 12/13/06

You promised that you'd never hurt me
Now I cry myself to sleep
You asked if you could keep me forever
But it's you who've left me alone
You said that you loved me
And now I don't even compare to your other love

Why would you hurt me so
What made me so undesirable
Why is she so perfect
How could you do this to me

You say that you meant the things that you said
--When you said them
But what about now
As I'm left in the aftermath
My heart broken and my insides a mess

I still long for your touch
I yearn to hear your voice
I need to feel your embrace
And I would beg to have you back

Damn you for making me love you
How dare you do this to me
I trusted you
You broke me

And yet...
Still I long for you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jessie53067 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I long for you

Contributed by jessie53067 on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 09:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



12/13/06

You promised that you'd never hurt me
Now I cry myself to sleep
You asked if you could keep me forever
But it's you who've left me alone
You said that you loved me
And now I don't even compare to your other love

Why would you hurt me so
What made me so undesirable
Why is she so perfect
How could you do this to me

You say that you meant the things that you said
--When you said them
But what about now
As I'm left in the aftermath
My heart broken and my insides a mess

I still long for your touch
I yearn to hear your voice
I need to feel your embrace
And I would beg to have you back

Damn you for making me love you
How dare you do this to me
I trusted you
You broke me

And yet...
Still I long for you




Copyright © jessie53067 ... [ 2006-12-13 21:57:22]
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Re: I long for you (User Rating: 1 )
by vikingbrokk on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:38:12 PM AEST
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well written...and exactly what I would like to say to someone myself.




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