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unknow dawn
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I have cast forth my dreams
upon the sea of hopes
and given myself unto the whims
of an unknown tomorrow,
with faith that I shall
rise once again to stand before
the dawning of a new day.
Copyright ©
wordsy
... [
2003-02-19 10:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: unknow dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:08:31 PM AEST (User
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slendid and captivating, add a little more to it and it should become superb, thanks for sharing |
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Re: unknow dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 08:53:10 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful! I'm inspired!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: unknow dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Percursors on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 02:26:32 AM AEST (User
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I LOVED IT...i'm not sure why i think it's becuz' it made me think of summer days, but it just made me feel so good...so thanx...keep writing. |
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