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[sid] => 129313
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Deceit
[time] => 2006-12-12 11:37:01
[hometext] => 'Another one in a set of poems i wrote to release myself from a heavily emotional stage in my life' (I'm not sure if I like the end or not - can you comment on what you think please. Thanks!)
[bodytext] => Awe-Inspiring colour Brown and Flickering Beauty Elegance and Love leading Into a Trap, A hole, an abyss Of Endless hatred Eyes like Death Misleading and expressing Unfortune, Like a fly, caught In a spider’s Web, struggling, Struggling, dying, Lifeless and limp Evil, how to Describe the feeling and Hate That she Casts Upon her next victim, beckoning, seducing into The lair of death And burning Hell The betrayal felt as She walks calmly and Happily The love and deceit The anger and hate You don’t understand Though you recognise But... Can only you see the evil within? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => errious [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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