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you is me
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 05:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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among the blood filled skies of black
lies a picture perfect image of you
disgusting and poisoned
filled with hate and loathing
an abasement to this place of forgiveness
blackened circles for eyes
blood red lips grimacing
pale and torn... you rip at your soul
no sunshine in this place of the forgotten
no will to survive
only will to sin... is that what you call it?
you suck up life and give nothing in return...
wait, you is me...
February 15, 2003
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LadyDama
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2003-02-19 05:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: you is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:48:02 PM AEST (User
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this has amazing imagery...well done...beautiful... |
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Re: you is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:40:40 PM AEST (User
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powerful and stunning, great write, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: you is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 05:46:36 AM AEST (User
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Ouch, that was deep, I can feel your pain, outstanding write.
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Re: you is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:30:15 PM AEST (User
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I dont know who this is written to or about, but it was really good. I liked the imagery and the emotion.
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