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First you let Robert die and now have this marriage end
Why do you bother, just let me hurt alone
You want me to suffer, this I’ve already known
With court coming on Wednesday, I know you won’t show yourself
You have me wanting to just kill myself
From now on ***** it! I don’t care what you do
There will never be anyone whom I’ll give my heart to
Let me just die and spare myself misery
I never knew love but from he I believed
God I was stupid I even risked my life
Meant every word in my vows the day he made me his wife
And what about my kids, they even fought their own dad
They only wanted his love when theirs’ they never had
Now they’ll blame me and US they won’t forgive
God just do some thing ,I got no more to give.
Mary Cortez
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GOT NO MORE TO GIVE

Contributed by MARYCORTEZ on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 10:45:01 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

God, I can’t believe you would do this again
First you let Robert die and now have this marriage end
Why do you bother, just let me hurt alone
You want me to suffer, this I’ve already known
With court coming on Wednesday, I know you won’t show yourself
You have me wanting to just kill myself
From now on ***** it! I don’t care what you do
There will never be anyone whom I’ll give my heart to
Let me just die and spare myself misery
I never knew love but from he I believed
God I was stupid I even risked my life
Meant every word in my vows the day he made me his wife
And what about my kids, they even fought their own dad
They only wanted his love when theirs’ they never had
Now they’ll blame me and US they won’t forgive
God just do some thing ,I got no more to give.
Mary Cortez

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Re: GOT NO MORE TO GIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:16:52 AM AEST
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wow this is very sad.. i can feel the sadness and anger in this at the same time.. i know its hard when you Go through something but God wants whats best for you. there is a reason for everything.. God never hurts anyone. and don't forget there is evil. God wants you to have total faith in him even when things seem bleak and dreary.. so give all this pain up to him and you will feel like a burden has lifted off your shoulder..

very powerful write.. hope things get betterfor you soon!! God bless

JENNI

Re: GOT NO MORE TO GIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:25:50 AM AEST
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My condolences on your loses and I hope by wrting you have found some relief, insight and healing... Time is 'gods' language and in passing one garners truths and meaning. We may never get to 'why' somehtings happen but if we de-emphasize this we can better understand the What, How, When and Where of things as 'he' helps those who help themsleves...I think its why i go for seconds and never no matter how upset my tummy gets do i ever swear off dessert...

Here is a nod from Shakespeare's Romeo & Juliet:

"ROMEO

O, wilt thou leave me so unsatisfied?

JULIET

What satisfaction canst thou have to-night?

ROMEO

The exchange of thy love's faithful vow for mine.

JULIET

I gave thee mine before thou didst request it:
And yet I would it were to give again.

ROMEO

Wouldst thou withdraw it? for what purpose, love?

JULIET

But to be frank, and give it thee again.
And yet I wish but for the thing I have:
My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite...."

Heres to Love Finding You, Truly!

Peace
Yangdantien

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