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Array ( [sid] => 129146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A present in the form of unforgettable words. To Jay [time] => 2006-12-07 17:04:59 [hometext] => this is the first poem I have posted ina very long time. Please comment. it's a present to my boyfriend right now. [bodytext] => I've lived my life so far.
In the faslane of nothingness.
I made terrible decisions.
Did some wrong things.
Regretted half my life.
Until now.

I was looking for love.
In all the wrong places.
When the person I needed most.
Was right in front of me.
Just like how it always goes.

He's made my life better.
More enjoyable.
But most of all.
He's made me remember.
What happiness is supposed to be.

I feel as if I 've loved him before.
Because loving him came so easily.

He makes me feel like a princess.
No, like a Queen.
He takes away all of my fears.
Allows me to cry.
Then wipes away my tears,
and makes me feel better.
he surprises me every day.
With some small gesutre of his love.
he doesn't need to say he loves's me.
Because he shows me all the time.

I love him.
I love him more then he knows.
This is my present to him.
I love you baby.
Thank you for everything amazing that
you've done to me or for me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Kirby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
A present in the form of unforgettable words. To Jay

Contributed by Kirby on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 05:04:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I've lived my life so far.
In the faslane of nothingness.
I made terrible decisions.
Did some wrong things.
Regretted half my life.
Until now.

I was looking for love.
In all the wrong places.
When the person I needed most.
Was right in front of me.
Just like how it always goes.

He's made my life better.
More enjoyable.
But most of all.
He's made me remember.
What happiness is supposed to be.

I feel as if I 've loved him before.
Because loving him came so easily.

He makes me feel like a princess.
No, like a Queen.
He takes away all of my fears.
Allows me to cry.
Then wipes away my tears,
and makes me feel better.
he surprises me every day.
With some small gesutre of his love.
he doesn't need to say he loves's me.
Because he shows me all the time.

I love him.
I love him more then he knows.
This is my present to him.
I love you baby.
Thank you for everything amazing that
you've done to me or for me.




Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2006-12-07 17:04:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A present in the form of unforgettable words. To Jay (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 10:46:25 PM AEST
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very nice kirby, your boyfriend will enjoy knowing your feelings to him, i think that this is a good write


Re: A present in the form of unforgettable words. To Jay (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 12:20:29 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. you can feel the love in this.. great job in expression.. I also liked the flow.. I am glad that things are better for you.. I hope everything works out for you.. God bless

JENNI




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