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Array ( [sid] => 129112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Lord! [time] => 2006-12-06 13:47:07 [hometext] => I joined because today one of the regular members...Nothingness...attempted suicide and is in the hospital please your prayers would be apreciated I know she loved alot of people here...please..keep her in your prayers...it only happened a few hours ago.. [bodytext] => Why she did it I will never know
And I refuse to give up and let her go
She always cared about those in need
She would do anything to help them succeed
But it was ripping her apart
I guess she had too much to carry in her heart
Please lord, help her to survive
Please lord, please keep her alive
I need her she was the only one that would care
Please lord, I beg you please hear my prayer
I am on my knees trembling and crying
Please lord, keep her from dying
I really need her and I know others do too
We just didn’t see her pain was true
Please lord…please save my dear friend
I know that this isn’t suppose to be her end
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Regret [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Please Lord!

Contributed by Regret on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 01:47:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Why she did it I will never know
And I refuse to give up and let her go
She always cared about those in need
She would do anything to help them succeed
But it was ripping her apart
I guess she had too much to carry in her heart
Please lord, help her to survive
Please lord, please keep her alive
I need her she was the only one that would care
Please lord, I beg you please hear my prayer
I am on my knees trembling and crying
Please lord, keep her from dying
I really need her and I know others do too
We just didn’t see her pain was true
Please lord…please save my dear friend
I know that this isn’t suppose to be her end




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Re: Please Lord! (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:10:19 AM AEST
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my thoughts and prayers are with her.


Re: Please Lord! (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:22:36 AM AEST
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i will pray for her
shes gonna be okay

catz


Re: Please Lord! (User Rating: 1 )
by jilted on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:30:27 AM AEST
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I hope with everything in me she pulls through. My cousin committed suicide yesterday, just posted a poem and saw your one..it breaks my heart..if only they could see that once their pain is over ours is just beginning and its an unbearable pain.


Re: Please Lord! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 01:54:30 AM AEST
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This is heartbreaking news. I will light a candle for her. I am saddened that she did this. Suicide leaves such a sting to those of us left in the after math of it. I send best wishes she will be ok.

~Michelle~


Re: Please Lord! (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 07:50:43 AM AEST
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To be loved in this way can only be helpful. Give the words freely so she can see and read your feelings too.




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