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Array ( [sid] => 129091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And Your Thoughts [time] => 2006-12-05 23:57:54 [hometext] => I kinda just wrote whatever came into my head, so it might be a little odd. Critique would be helpful. [bodytext] => View from above
you're a snowflake
falling, floating
slowly downwards
you see her
happy, laughing
spinning and twirling
hair and skirt out like umbrellas
like in slow motion...
Step by step.
Around and around.
getting closer
you see the sparkle in her eyes
excitement in her laugh
happiness in her movements
And your thoughts
you used to be like that
excited for each day
a reason to wake up
...before.
Now
not driven
no purpose
alone...lonely.
Getting closer,
nostalgia seeps into you
taking over
sadness
pain
thoughts, memories
and then
Black. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 73 [informant] => musicXisXlife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

And Your Thoughts

Contributed by musicXisXlife on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:57:54 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

View from above
you're a snowflake
falling, floating
slowly downwards
you see her
happy, laughing
spinning and twirling
hair and skirt out like umbrellas
like in slow motion...
Step by step.
Around and around.
getting closer
you see the sparkle in her eyes
excitement in her laugh
happiness in her movements
And your thoughts
you used to be like that
excited for each day
a reason to wake up
...before.
Now
not driven
no purpose
alone...lonely.
Getting closer,
nostalgia seeps into you
taking over
sadness
pain
thoughts, memories
and then
Black.

Copyright © musicXisXlife ... [ 2006-12-05 23:57:54]
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Re: And Your Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 01:17:17 AM AEST
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I like it...i don't know why really...but I do ^_^
Write Everything!
Always, Abraham

Re: And Your Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:56:06 PM AEST
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OMG-Ailish, it's, it's just so wonderful!! I lOve this poem. I think I know what you're getting at.
Love ya babe, keep writing!!!!!!
.::Jess::.

Re: And Your Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 07:53:52 AM AEST
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the cycle in life we all find from time to time. The hard part is going past it and find what we misplaced. Giving your words I hope helps.

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