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Heaven
Contributed by
errious
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Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 04:46:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Copyright ©
errious
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2006-12-05 16:46:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 05:45:08 PM AEST (User
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i like the flow of this piece.. very good.. i get the feeling of our dead ones that we were close passed on will reunite wth us when we get to heaven.. i enjoyed this write.. good job
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Re: Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by dh_guitarist on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 07:14:48 PM AEST (User
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i really liked this poem. It was very well written. You said that your 11 year old brother wrote this? you need to congratulate him. |
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Re: Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 10:29:02 PM AEST (User
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this is good.
I like it!
cheers,
glass. |
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