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open heart surgery
Contributed by
BSteel
on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 04:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Katie come back to me,
sign in on the inner city,
from the Iron City,
you were beyond beauty,
told me straight up,
life's like the matrix,
i used this as my ignition to spark the biggest fire in the west,
your grace, and pure faith is beyond kerosene, can't you see the love i bring,
would light the way for everyone, yet all iv'e done , all i've become,
becomes nothing,
without your love,
your still the one,
that a man wants to share his kingdom with.
Copyright ©
BSteel
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2006-12-05 16:05:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: open heart surgery
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 07:22:50 PM AEST (User
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very nice flow to this.. i like the expression of love in this.. awesome job.. devotion like that is hard to come by in this day and age.. very good write..i enjoyed the flow and i hope this katie loves you just as much ..
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