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Array ( [sid] => 129063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night Sky [time] => 2006-12-05 14:37:10 [hometext] => I simple poem about the Night Sky [bodytext] => Look across that night sky
What do you see?

I see clouds
And Lights flickering
And a supposed God controlling
Everyone
And
Everything

In some respects
I see a greater
Thing
More than peoples bling
Or the slang of the cultures
Of the U.K

I see Realms
Stars
Planets
And the
Universe

I see
Life
Being Born
And Death
Reborn from the
Phoenix Flames
And the Black soot
Of
Retribution

Remembering back though
I remember asking you
What
You
See
…

So
What do you see?

Do you see a greater Plain?
Do you see a Heavenly Body?
Or
Do you see what I see
But Clearer in your
Elegance?

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 25 [informant] => NDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Night Sky

Contributed by NDean on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 02:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Look across that night sky
What do you see?

I see clouds
And Lights flickering
And a supposed God controlling
Everyone
And
Everything

In some respects
I see a greater
Thing
More than peoples bling
Or the slang of the cultures
Of the U.K

I see Realms
Stars
Planets
And the
Universe

I see
Life
Being Born
And Death
Reborn from the
Phoenix Flames
And the Black soot
Of
Retribution

Remembering back though
I remember asking you
What
You
See
…

So
What do you see?

Do you see a greater Plain?
Do you see a Heavenly Body?
Or
Do you see what I see
But Clearer in your
Elegance?

Copyright Â© NDean ... [ 2006-12-05 14:37:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 06:58:06 PM AEST
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nice flow in this poem.. i like the way you see beyond the sky.. this makes you think.. great job !!

JENNI

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 08:53:07 PM AEST
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Enchanting write. I like what you see. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by deep on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:13:45 AM AEST
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Hi NDean.
Its amazing how you can weave a poem like a conversation......so casual and yet so profound.
A poem is special when it doesn't lean on you too heavily.......this one is feather light......airy and dreamy ......like the night sky.

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by theeman on Friday, 6th July 2012 @ 09:12:06 AM AEST
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i love to look st the sky in general it teaches you lessons. in the morning it shows u the majesty of the sun and how it brings life to this planet, it shows us clouds bigger than our bigggest buildings and wind stronger than our strongest armys. it shows us how small we are compared to the majesty of nature and creation. at night the sky shows us piece and serenity and also how small we are compared to the entirity of creation not even a dust on the beach . its like a magic show filled with surprises. i love the sky and ur poem :-D

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