Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 21:31:10 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 129050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is My Wish [time] => 2006-12-05 08:14:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This family has been broken
I am trying to make it whole

But we keep getting resist ants
From those outside forces that oppose

I can only do so much
without any help

I ask that we all work together
As a family of one

In order for us
to become this whole family again

This is my wish
to the man above

That he will allow us
To become whole once again
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 373 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sadaddy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
This is My Wish

Contributed by sadaddy on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 08:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



This family has been broken
I am trying to make it whole

But we keep getting resist ants
From those outside forces that oppose

I can only do so much
without any help

I ask that we all work together
As a family of one

In order for us
to become this whole family again

This is my wish
to the man above

That he will allow us
To become whole once again




Copyright © sadaddy ... [ 2006-12-05 08:14:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by S_Cardinal on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:18:37 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Sadaddy!

A poem of interest for several families; broken families go way back, as you well know, for many, many years.

Your [this is my wish] title is a prayer in itself. Your speaking voice is an active voice, I am most certain many will identify with your write.

Families: be like soldier ants, go out find food, bring it on home; build-brighten it up with nutritious love and strength; that way many who enter into it will be content.

Sadaddy! The tone of your speaking voice is very tender indeed, energizing at the same time; there is a lot of power in what you have written.

The third line seemed to be a metaphor to me the reader, and it worked out well that way in my mind and heart.

The unrhymed couplets made it easy to read and digest.

Wonderful work, very positive work, I enjoyed it, I thank you for sharing! Sone


Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusfreak on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 12:01:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I am on your side. God bless your family.


Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 05:54:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I pray that your wish is granted my dear friend. A heartfelt poem very well penned.
God bless you and yours and may your family be whole once again.
Take care~
warm hugs n prayers,
Sue M


Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 10:59:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The least I can do for this touching write is to add my prayers to your own..."poof" consider it a done deal. Good job & good luck...Sincerely

~Kerry Lynne


Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:27:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I do so sympathize with you ..

it is difficult to shoulder so many burdens on one's own.
Hoping that comfort and love find you and that your
wish comes true. Especially now.

~Breezy


Re: This is My Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 08:55:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Family can make you or break you.
I hear a call of support here, an identity of who we are....a hearts wish to be the whole family, united for all time and it rings true and wonderful. I pray your call is answered for we are but the sum total of our family.Blessings for knowing this.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com