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Array ( [sid] => 12899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Dream Of Us Together [time] => 2003-02-18 18:40:00 [hometext] => Hello all, sorry I have been incedibly busy...with the new Job...the new woman in my life and the kids. This is something I wrote today for my new girlfriend. I hope to get some feedback on it...good, bad or indifferent. Thanks to all who have posted comments before on my work. You people are wonderful. [bodytext] => The time we’ve shared,
Has been like a dream.
With you by my side,
We are the perfect team.

I awake in the morning,
Wanting to hear your voice.
I hope one day soon,
That I am your choice.

When you are away,
I miss you my dear.
For you make me so happy,
You bring me such cheer.

I long to reach out,
To hold your sweet hand.
To make you so happy,
Is what I have planned.

I find it so hard,
Not to take you in my arms.
There’s no chance that I,
Could ever resist your charms.


I don’t care about,
What others have to say.
I dream of you at night,
And think of you all day.

I want a relationship,
I want one with you.
My feelings for you,
Are so incredibly true.

I know you’ve been hurt,
I can see it in your eyes.
But I promise you dear,
I’ll never make you cry.

So let down your guard,
Open your heart to me.
You’ve already won mine,
You hold the only key.

Put your trust in me,
And I’ll never let you down.
I’ll always make you smile,
With me you’ll never frown.

By Peter W. Easley 18Feb03
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 2 [informant] => FireStorm12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Dream Of Us Together

Contributed by FireStorm12 on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The time we’ve shared,
Has been like a dream.
With you by my side,
We are the perfect team.

I awake in the morning,
Wanting to hear your voice.
I hope one day soon,
That I am your choice.

When you are away,
I miss you my dear.
For you make me so happy,
You bring me such cheer.

I long to reach out,
To hold your sweet hand.
To make you so happy,
Is what I have planned.

I find it so hard,
Not to take you in my arms.
There’s no chance that I,
Could ever resist your charms.


I don’t care about,
What others have to say.
I dream of you at night,
And think of you all day.

I want a relationship,
I want one with you.
My feelings for you,
Are so incredibly true.

I know you’ve been hurt,
I can see it in your eyes.
But I promise you dear,
I’ll never make you cry.

So let down your guard,
Open your heart to me.
You’ve already won mine,
You hold the only key.

Put your trust in me,
And I’ll never let you down.
I’ll always make you smile,
With me you’ll never frown.

By Peter W. Easley 18Feb03




Copyright © FireStorm12 ... [ 2003-02-18 18:40:00]
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Re: A Dream Of Us Together (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:25:59 PM AEST
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Peter so glad to hear everythings working out well! I'm happy to see a smile in your words!
A new love does wonders for your soul!
Christina


Re: A Dream Of Us Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:28:45 PM AEST
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Very sweet, and nicely written.
Besat of luck!
Jeff


Re: A Dream Of Us Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 11:57:38 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful write.... This was so sweet, Peter...welcome to ypdc if I haven't said it yet..
Jenni




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