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So Much Clouds My Mind

Contributed by catz77 on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:53:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



When i wake up my mind is blank
sometimes i wish it stayed that way
but its foolish to think it could
so much clouds my mind

i wish my problems could erode
all my memories and sins erased
i stress and worry every second of my life
every time i cry its for them

They dont know how much i care
i care more than anything
i pray and cry for there protection
behind four walls im on my knees

Do they even care about what i think?
Do they pray for my protection?
Do they pray for my health?
If they do than why do they treat me badly ?

I cannot picture them on their knees
with tears of pain falling like bricks
hoping all is well within my heart
...and yet i am ok

If no one cared id be dead
but some one cares more than any one
Hes the God i pray to
The God that protects me and those i pray for

He sees me on my knees
and he wipes away my tears
he picks me up and tells me
"i love you child and all your problems and sins have been erased."

And that is the grace and power of our God
He made me feel appreciated when no one else did.




Copyright © catz77 ... [ 2006-12-03 00:53:56]
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Re: So Much Clouds My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
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I have tears reading this. It is sad when people dont take the time to care.

You wrote this with great pain .
The end brought forth hope and light.

True heart and feeling withing this lovely poem. Sometimes we need to walk away from those who do not treat us with the love and respect we are worthy of.

~Michelle~


Re: So Much Clouds My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:26:25 AM AEST
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A biblical masterpeice, great testimony and awesome faith.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: So Much Clouds My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:52:28 AM AEST
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Keep that faith, catz, and all will be well. Good write.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy




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