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The Fairy Thief ( part l )

Contributed by doug on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 03:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical




See the world within the mist
evening trees of silhouette
painted like a perfect kiss
air as sweet as lover's breath

'tween those silent titan trees
swirled the flakes of living snow
through the pink and purple haze
laughing madly as they go

speeding through their shrouded womb
up and down and inbetween or
lying listless 'pon the stone
fountain of eternal dream

But woe , there comes a greenish fog
near to fairy wood it creeps
roaming like a feral dog
and woe to all that meet the teeth

and as it rose the fairies turned with
eyes so wide they looked macabre
hearts of tiny humming birds
beneath the thunderheaded dog

the fearsome thing began to swell
its terror swirled the fairies hair
just a moment 'fore it fell
and scattered wee folk everywhere

pulling down to drowning mist
where magic is of no avail
the tunnel throat of whirling fog
staring past the lips of hell

the horror grinned at what it'd done
and ambled onward through the dark
leaving wee folk lying numb
with tiny twitching fairy hearts...
****

To be continued...




Copyright © doug ... [ 2006-12-02 15:57:21]
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Re: The Fairy Thief ( part l ) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:13:35 PM AEST
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ahhh I so loved this. Refreshing to say the least. Your flow and the wording brought this to life in a magical way.

~Michelle~


Re: The Fairy Thief ( part l ) (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:57:45 PM AEST
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very nice, and well worded, it all flows together, and i can't wait to read the other part


Re: The Fairy Thief ( part l ) (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 11:59:05 PM AEST
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Cool, in a faintly creepy kind of way. I'm interested to see the next part.


Re: The Fairy Thief ( part l ) (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:15:14 PM AEST
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Hurray Hurray...tell me more...excellent, I love these kind of writes. Spellbounded and full of action and descriptive features...fairies and green fogs..I am in my glory. I am captured and seated wide eye ready to read more.....


Re: The Fairy Thief ( part l ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 09:59:18 AM AEST
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fantastic! ur a natural and a pro! Love it! looking forward to part 2!




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