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I was just drowning in the days that didn’t work out
You’re not here
I know that
As the sun rises
It purifies the place where I am
The warm wind takes away
The blue stamp imprinted on me
If, for example, these words reach you
You can rip out my vocal cords and throw them away
I was longing
To have lost my stinging wounds
And for your warmth to take everything away
Even if it was just a dream
Your warmth is disappearing
Taking with it the place where I am
I want to go to sleep wrapped in your arms
They wipe away my punishment
The pieces of my memories are rotting away
I don’t have enough piercings to cover myself
I'm forgetting you, you're fading
Your voice fades into the rabble
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Voice

Contributed by trackiller2006 on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:50:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My shimmering haze hangs charmingly in the air
I was just drowning in the days that didn’t work out
You’re not here
I know that
As the sun rises
It purifies the place where I am
The warm wind takes away
The blue stamp imprinted on me
If, for example, these words reach you
You can rip out my vocal cords and throw them away
I was longing
To have lost my stinging wounds
And for your warmth to take everything away
Even if it was just a dream
Your warmth is disappearing
Taking with it the place where I am
I want to go to sleep wrapped in your arms
They wipe away my punishment
The pieces of my memories are rotting away
I don’t have enough piercings to cover myself
I'm forgetting you, you're fading
Your voice fades into the rabble

Copyright Â© trackiller2006 ... [ 2006-12-01 22:50:33]
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Re: Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:24:11 PM AEST
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An emotive write, deeply moving.

Michelle

Re: Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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nicely done! i can feel the emotion through these words...i loved it.;)

Re: Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparkz16 on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 11:12:58 AM AEST
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this explains why im so depressed right now...cuz its not only the fight me and my mom had lastnite its other things to...your poems all ways have away of getting me i love it i love all your work

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