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Array ( [sid] => 128934 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let it show [time] => 2006-12-01 21:33:12 [hometext] => this is for you bryce...my big brother.... thanks for being there [bodytext] => i havent always been good to you
and this i know
so now it is time
for me to let it show

laying under the stars
and you showing me the constellations
and now i relize
im only one of your creations

you made me who i am
and what i want to be
you are my heart and soul
and i hope you agree

times have been hard
and things have gone wrong
you have always been there
to help me along

i need you now
more than ever
to help me over come
the chalenges i will endeavor

my life would be nothing
if you were never there
i would wither away
if you never cared

i love you more than anything
i never let you know
so now it is time
for me to let it show [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 23 [informant] => blindchoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

let it show

Contributed by blindchoice on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 09:33:12 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

i havent always been good to you
and this i know
so now it is time
for me to let it show

laying under the stars
and you showing me the constellations
and now i relize
im only one of your creations

you made me who i am
and what i want to be
you are my heart and soul
and i hope you agree

times have been hard
and things have gone wrong
you have always been there
to help me along

i need you now
more than ever
to help me over come
the chalenges i will endeavor

my life would be nothing
if you were never there
i would wither away
if you never cared

i love you more than anything
i never let you know
so now it is time
for me to let it show

Copyright © blindchoice ... [ 2006-12-01 21:33:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: let it show (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:40:51 PM AEST
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This is just to precious for my words.BEAUTIFUL!!!Thank you for adding this Beauty to our world & thank you, Bryce, for whatever you do to inspire such love & devotion from such a gracious soul. Please keep expressing your graditude,blindchoice, as the vibrational content of the universe has need of this kind of karma...what comes around goes around!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe

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