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Ever forward into nothing
Blank screen of mind
All connected by thin thread

Web of remembrances
Lives together enfolded
Past, present, future
Humankind lost in song

What was may be again
As spiral continues
Nothing changes
But all is different

Images float on winds
Of storms yet to come
Still we hold strong
Connected to the earth

While imagination flies free
Twisting and turning
On hope and doubts
As we tumble on

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Tumble On

Contributed by NoSaint on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Moments streaking
Ever forward into nothing
Blank screen of mind
All connected by thin thread

Web of remembrances
Lives together enfolded
Past, present, future
Humankind lost in song

What was may be again
As spiral continues
Nothing changes
But all is different

Images float on winds
Of storms yet to come
Still we hold strong
Connected to the earth

While imagination flies free
Twisting and turning
On hope and doubts
As we tumble on

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2006-12-01 12:09:54]
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Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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Loved the down to earth softness of this write my friend.

Michelle

Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:45:51 PM AEST
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lovely soft write :-)

Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 01:01:08 PM AEST
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"Web of remembrances" I LOVE THIS LINE.
and I agree with everyone about the soft feel this write has.
Good Job!!!

Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 09:27:13 PM AEST
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"As we tumble on"

Nice Shari, very nice. I loved this. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:52:13 PM AEST
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Dearest Shari~ I have missed you so my dear friend. I too, have missed your beautifully ascribed masterpieces. As always your work has such depth to it. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for posting it~
love, hugs n prayers
sue m

Re: Tumble On (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:45:57 AM AEST
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This was a good poem... I liked how you wrote it and I like the flow... Beautifully done...

Take care
Christina

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