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Array ( [sid] => 128886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => please don't hate me mom [time] => 2006-11-30 22:12:33 [hometext] => dedicated to : my mom [bodytext] => please dont hate me mom
i know i disappointed you
i’ll try and behave
but you have to know that everything i do
isnt to hurt you
right now i know
it seems untrue
but you should know mom, i love you.

please dont hate me mom
i’vemade et another mistake
everytime i mess up i see your love fade
by now it seems as if you wish i’d disappear
and with that realization what do you expect me to say?
i have to live with my wrong doings everyday
so you dont have to mom, they’re not yours,
they’re MY mistakes!

please dont hate me mom
i know i keep making you cry
and everytime i do i want to die
because i know the source of your tears is me
yet i keep messing up and i dont know why
so here we are again mom
and again we fight
yelling like enemies
but we’re supposed to be family mom, and i know i lied!
cant we find another way to solve this
I hate it when you cry!
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please don't hate me mom

Contributed by tearstained_soul on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

please dont hate me mom
i know i disappointed you
i’ll try and behave
but you have to know that everything i do
isnt to hurt you
right now i know
it seems untrue
but you should know mom, i love you.

please dont hate me mom
i’vemade et another mistake
everytime i mess up i see your love fade
by now it seems as if you wish i’d disappear
and with that realization what do you expect me to say?
i have to live with my wrong doings everyday
so you dont have to mom, they’re not yours,
they’re MY mistakes!

please dont hate me mom
i know i keep making you cry
and everytime i do i want to die
because i know the source of your tears is me
yet i keep messing up and i dont know why
so here we are again mom
and again we fight
yelling like enemies
but we’re supposed to be family mom, and i know i lied!
cant we find another way to solve this
I hate it when you cry!

Copyright Â© tearstained_soul ... [ 2006-11-30 22:12:33]
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Re: please don't hate me mom (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:50:22 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, I hope that you would share it was your mother in order for her to understand what you are feeling. May you and your family find the peace and joy that you need in your hearts.

sadaddy

Re: please don't hate me mom (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 11:13:57 PM AEST
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good write
showing this to your mom would probubly help
my mom and i are pretty close but sometimes i see her crying and even though
its not my fault it hurts to see her tears
so i know how you fell
well at least a little

Re: please don't hate me mom (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:04:11 AM AEST
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This made me cry..I hope things get better..

Re: please don't hate me mom (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 04:42:12 AM AEST
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This poem is heart wrenching. I hope that this is just a poem and not your life.

My daughter is her own worst enemy. It doesn't matter how many times she messes up. I will always be there to pick her up. Then set her strait. That's what moms do. It's in the mom hand book... ; )

Take care kiddo,

~Me~

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