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Array ( [sid] => 128860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Less of You [time] => 2006-11-30 11:20:46 [hometext] => This ones kinda about how much wieght ive been losing lately...kinda scary...but we'll see.... [bodytext] => You’re losing it...its’ leaving you...
But will you go too far?
Will you be able to stop?
How are you supposed to know?
That shadows looking sexy,
That reflections looking small,
Where have you gone?
Isn't part of you missing?
So...where did it go...?
Tell me missy, huh?
What do you have to say now?
Who takes the blame for this one?
People are noticing...
Most say you look great,
Some seem a little concerned...
But do they feel your pain?
Do they go through the struggle you do?
To simply put it in your mouth and swallow?
Do they feel the sickness inside,
The dizziness and the nausea?
No...but you do don’t you?
Clothes are getting baggy,
Funny...they use to be really tight..
Perhaps only time will tell,
Where your future is leading you...
Until then, get use to less,
Because apparently less is more,
Get use to that mirror,
Cus every time you look,
You’ll see less and less of you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 61 [informant] => xxnights_childxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Less of You

Contributed by xxnights_childxx on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 11:20:46 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

You’re losing it...its’ leaving you...
But will you go too far?
Will you be able to stop?
How are you supposed to know?
That shadows looking sexy,
That reflections looking small,
Where have you gone?
Isn't part of you missing?
So...where did it go...?
Tell me missy, huh?
What do you have to say now?
Who takes the blame for this one?
People are noticing...
Most say you look great,
Some seem a little concerned...
But do they feel your pain?
Do they go through the struggle you do?
To simply put it in your mouth and swallow?
Do they feel the sickness inside,
The dizziness and the nausea?
No...but you do don’t you?
Clothes are getting baggy,
Funny...they use to be really tight..
Perhaps only time will tell,
Where your future is leading you...
Until then, get use to less,
Because apparently less is more,
Get use to that mirror,
Cus every time you look,
You’ll see less and less of you.

Copyright Â© xxnights_childxx ... [ 2006-11-30 11:20:46]
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Re: Less of You (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 02:58:23 PM AEST
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I really like this write/// iI also struggle with fluctuation of weight loss// thin is never enough /// food repulses me and it's good to know I am not alone... Hope it gets better.........at least eat some RITZ crackers . LOL. keep up the good writing

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