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Your Standing in the ruins of a city
A city of ten thousand burning & broken
isn't It sad how everything changed,
In the blink of an eye lives erased
From life’s very fabric
A fabric woven on corruption & false hopes,
Poison fed to a generation of children
Be like us!, Look like us!, WORSHIP US!
They have forgotten who they are
Led by the throat by false prophets
Who herald their own destruction,
So pray to your parasite gods sinners
But you will find no acceptance in their eyes,
Your deaths will be slow at their hands
As they feed off your desires & your lust
Until you are no more than an empty shell
Devoid of emotion, numb to feeling & dead inside,
They will leave you sinner
Stranded in your halo of depravity
It will serve as your cell until the end of time,
Enjoy your existence sinner only remember...
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Paid In Blood!

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:54:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Paid In Blood!

Your Standing in the ruins of a city
A city of ten thousand burning & broken
isn't It sad how everything changed,
In the blink of an eye lives erased
From life’s very fabric
A fabric woven on corruption & false hopes,
Poison fed to a generation of children
Be like us!, Look like us!, WORSHIP US!
They have forgotten who they are
Led by the throat by false prophets
Who herald their own destruction,
So pray to your parasite gods sinners
But you will find no acceptance in their eyes,
Your deaths will be slow at their hands
As they feed off your desires & your lust
Until you are no more than an empty shell
Devoid of emotion, numb to feeling & dead inside,
They will leave you sinner
Stranded in your halo of depravity
It will serve as your cell until the end of time,
Enjoy your existence sinner only remember...
Your bill will be collected on death.

Copyright Â© Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2006-11-30 10:54:39]
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Re: Paid In Blood! (User Rating: 1 )
by Immortal-Dragon21 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:57:24 AM AEST
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this is the tale of how society is destroying itself as told by the "goodness" of mankind. I was the sinner in this tale at one point of my life but i have been shown the reality of the mater i hope more out there can see what is realy before them

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