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Array ( [sid] => 128851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Girl of my dreams [time] => 2006-11-30 08:50:25 [hometext] => This is a poem about desired love [bodytext] => There she is
The girl of my dreams
Looking ever so pretty
But yet much more innocent

Her eyes never fail to glisten
They are like a never ending painting
If I were to see them cry
My heart would sink and drown within its own sympathy

Whenever i see her smile
I feel so helpless within her gaze
It's like I'm a lost child
Trying to find a path back to reality

My feelings for her have grown and grown
In a world where no one can do wrong
tomorrows feelings will be just as powerful
For this girl I consider to be my everything

So there she is
The girl of my dreams
Looking ever so pretty
But yet oblivious to the fact the i love her [comments] => 1 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kevin100 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Girl of my dreams

Contributed by kevin100 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 08:50:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There she is
The girl of my dreams
Looking ever so pretty
But yet much more innocent

Her eyes never fail to glisten
They are like a never ending painting
If I were to see them cry
My heart would sink and drown within its own sympathy

Whenever i see her smile
I feel so helpless within her gaze
It's like I'm a lost child
Trying to find a path back to reality

My feelings for her have grown and grown
In a world where no one can do wrong
tomorrows feelings will be just as powerful
For this girl I consider to be my everything

So there she is
The girl of my dreams
Looking ever so pretty
But yet oblivious to the fact the i love her

Copyright © kevin100 ... [ 2006-11-30 08:50:25]
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Re: Girl of my dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparkz16 on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 08:02:24 AM AEST
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wow...nice really nice...there are soo many ppl out there that know a girl or guy and are jus inlove with them and not cuz they are beautifull but because of who they are deep down inside but always the girl goes for the jerk and the guy goes for the twirp...if they only knew...i really like keep up the good writing ;)

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