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Array ( [sid] => 128804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Just Don't Understand [time] => 2006-11-28 22:11:16 [hometext] => Please read, and feedback would be GREATLY appreciated please... [bodytext] => I just don’t understand
You kiss me
Softly, sweetly
Sending shivers down my spine
Sparking a fire in my heart

I just don’t understand
I say
You say
Neither do I

I just don’t understand
Then why
I don’t know
You say
As you leave

Something began
And it was over before it could start

I just don’t understand
You kiss me
Your lips say not now
And your head says
Never

I just don’t understand
You didn’t even tell me
Playing a game with me
I am no game

My heart is stronger than my head
Or is it the other way around
I just don’t understand
These days anyway

I kiss you
Try to anyway
And your gone before I say
Why

We’ll talk again
I just don’t understand
Why not now
You kiss me
And your gone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Ari [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Just Don't Understand

Contributed by Ari on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I just don’t understand
You kiss me
Softly, sweetly
Sending shivers down my spine
Sparking a fire in my heart

I just don’t understand
I say
You say
Neither do I

I just don’t understand
Then why
I don’t know
You say
As you leave

Something began
And it was over before it could start

I just don’t understand
You kiss me
Your lips say not now
And your head says
Never

I just don’t understand
You didn’t even tell me
Playing a game with me
I am no game

My heart is stronger than my head
Or is it the other way around
I just don’t understand
These days anyway

I kiss you
Try to anyway
And your gone before I say
Why

We’ll talk again
I just don’t understand
Why not now
You kiss me
And your gone

Copyright Â© Ari ... [ 2006-11-28 22:11:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Just Don't Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:35:30 PM AEST
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I know this poem rather well.. I was like that with someone... but I don't regret being like that.

Eternally Punished,
Faust

Re: I Just Don't Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:04:16 AM AEST
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Wow. I love how you keep repeating "I just don't understand"...making it known, and just, well done. This is really good.

Re: I Just Don't Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:54:07 AM AEST
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Somehow the repitition of the "I just don't understand" is both good and bad.
It seems to drive me crazy or even to the point of annoying, and yet somehow that very emotion works itself into thew poem as being right.
You made it work!
Great job!

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