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Array ( [sid] => 128778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams [time] => 2006-11-28 07:41:37 [hometext] => I saw a dream today and just wrote this. it can be taken as a song or a poem [bodytext] => I see these dreams
maybe you see them too
a world with nothing it seams
a world with just me and you
these are my dreams.

[chorus 1]

It's a world with only sky
a world with mountains so high
a world where you can fly
a world where time flys by
these are my dreams.

[chorus1]

I am in a vertigo
cities floating in the sky
everyhing here moves so slow
it's a place where time is infinite
these are my dreams.

[chorus 2]

I see a world with no barriers
a world where people work for each other
a world where people shed no tears
and live their lives for one another
these are my dreams.

[chorus 1]

I see a world with one religion
it's a world without poverty and war
a world without racial discrimination
it's a world for us all
these are my dreams.

[chorus3]






these are the chorus

[chorus1]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wake up before noon

[chorus2]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wakeup soon

[chorus3]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
Oh I woke up ,so soon! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 25 [informant] => theeman [notes] => .....edited for spelling as requested...mod_6...28-11-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Dreams

Contributed by theeman on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:41:37 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I see these dreams
maybe you see them too
a world with nothing it seams
a world with just me and you
these are my dreams.

[chorus 1]

It's a world with only sky
a world with mountains so high
a world where you can fly
a world where time flys by
these are my dreams.

[chorus1]

I am in a vertigo
cities floating in the sky
everyhing here moves so slow
it's a place where time is infinite
these are my dreams.

[chorus 2]

I see a world with no barriers
a world where people work for each other
a world where people shed no tears
and live their lives for one another
these are my dreams.

[chorus 1]

I see a world with one religion
it's a world without poverty and war
a world without racial discrimination
it's a world for us all
these are my dreams.

[chorus3]






these are the chorus

[chorus1]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wake up before noon

[chorus2]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wakeup soon

[chorus3]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
Oh I woke up ,so soon!




Copyright © theeman ... [ 2006-11-28 07:41:37]
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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:55:47 AM AEST
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It would've been much easier to read if you'd wrote the whole poem/song, instead of poeple having to do this whole fill-in-the-blanks-thing
I'd change that, distracts too much

Other then that, good job
keept it up


with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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This has the making of a beautiful song..
honey56




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