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Array ( [sid] => 128769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life [time] => 2006-11-27 23:11:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is the sun
Who wakes me up for another day
That brightens each and every day

There is shine
Who shines so bright in the evening sky
That keeps me dreaming of better tomorrows

Then there is the light of my life
Who is always there when I am down
That has this gift of lighting the way

Without these three
I could not be
This is the sun, the shine
And the light of my life

This could only be my family
Who always brightens my life
With every passing day [comments] => 6 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sadaddy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life

Contributed by sadaddy on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 11:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



There is the sun
Who wakes me up for another day
That brightens each and every day

There is shine
Who shines so bright in the evening sky
That keeps me dreaming of better tomorrows

Then there is the light of my life
Who is always there when I am down
That has this gift of lighting the way

Without these three
I could not be
This is the sun, the shine
And the light of my life

This could only be my family
Who always brightens my life
With every passing day




Copyright © sadaddy ... [ 2006-11-27 23:11:27]
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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I loved this. What would life be without these things and people in our life to brighten the path.

Michelle


Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 01:00:11 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write and really appreciated, I'm sure.
huggs,
emy


Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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i agree with Emy and Michelle
what a beautiful write


Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 06:54:50 PM AEST
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A very nice write
honey56


Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 11:00:42 PM AEST
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1st off, thatnx for commenting on my poem, "please dont hate me mom"
2nd. this poem is very sweet makes me wish i felt the smae.... me and my family dont get a long too well (lol) anyways, i love ur writing style!
kisses
a stranger


Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 08:42:03 AM AEST
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Oh man, POPS,

I love it... A far cry from the rest of your work and
a much more appealing side of you (the other side
makes me sad for ya' my friend)... I am glad you
have light in your life my friend... some folks do not
and that is what gets me through life...

Thank You for writing this and write some more like
this...

BEAUTIFUL!!! MAN!!! JUST BEAUTIFUL

Thank You


Bill     




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