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And the slay of the day
The cold breeze whispers in our ear
Causing us a chill of fear
The deads sweet song
Helps us wrong the right
The black sky
Is as starless as I
The murder of crows crow
The sea of devils dance
We mock the dead as we pass
With footsteps as fragile as glass
Past the graves of stone
We walk alone
We come upon a single grave
Etched with a name
The night becomes still
The silence so shrill
That it seems to scream
The hurt we can no longer feel
For we are lost
In the world of gain and loss
Lets watch the sea of silver stars
As the appear to the night
It was once a beautiful sight

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Night's Pleasures

Contributed by liindso14 on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 08:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

With the fright of the night
And the slay of the day
The cold breeze whispers in our ear
Causing us a chill of fear
The deads sweet song
Helps us wrong the right
The black sky
Is as starless as I
The murder of crows crow
The sea of devils dance
We mock the dead as we pass
With footsteps as fragile as glass
Past the graves of stone
We walk alone
We come upon a single grave
Etched with a name
The night becomes still
The silence so shrill
That it seems to scream
The hurt we can no longer feel
For we are lost
In the world of gain and loss
Lets watch the sea of silver stars
As the appear to the night
It was once a beautiful sight

Copyright © liindso14 ... [ 2006-11-27 20:08:38]
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Re: Night's Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:38:33 PM AEST
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what a curious poem. you do what I do on occassion...just write random things. it's funny how you can reread what you wrote and find much symbolism. this one sure made me cock my head to the side and think about it, and I definitely like it. well done for a flush of words!

Re: Night's Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by Lonnie on Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 12:35:29 PM AEST
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I like the theme here, but believe it could be polished a bit more. Otherwise, a well-though-out piece, well worth reading!

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